This is Angie Barker's senior studio project blog. The project is creating a new identity for a non-profit, more specifically The Community Table of Jackson County for my project (everyone else in my class picked their own.) The Community Table has been servicing Jackson County for over 10 years.
Thursday, April 21, 2011
Some fun stuff with the poster/poster pot/etc.
The poster isn't finished, but I was just too excited to keep this new development to myself. I'm. In. Lurves. Check out those nifty cooking/eating utensils!
Angie, The poster hierarchy is much better though the spacing at the top seems crowded. I'd move everything down a bit, especially with the empty space below. Did you think about using "warm plates" first -- then "warm hearts"? I guess it works either way but warm plates, warm hearts says to me that community feeding efforts result in stronger community ties (warm hearts).
Do you plan to integrate the illustrated utensils into the campaign further? This illustrative style is becoming a recognizable visual component (especially with the decorative shift in the pot). In what way does the decorative approach address initial client goals? (a reminder to review these). Another suggestion for the poster: Try shortening the dotted vertical line below the pot (making the pot closer to the dotted horizontal) and center the dotted vertical more. The pot should look well balanced on the vertical/horizatal, not look likes it's moving. The overall structure is very locked in to the vertical/horizontal movement that takes the viewer to the bottom.
Love the design..so pretty and fresh
ReplyDeleteAngie,
ReplyDeleteThe poster hierarchy is much better though the spacing at the top seems crowded. I'd move everything down a bit, especially with the empty space below.
Did you think about using "warm plates" first -- then "warm hearts"? I guess it works either way but warm plates, warm hearts says to me that community feeding efforts result in stronger community ties (warm hearts).
What are these illustrations? Where do they go in your campaign? It's great to see you experimenting but I want to see how you will use them!
ReplyDeleteDo you plan to integrate the illustrated utensils into the campaign further? This illustrative style is becoming a recognizable visual component (especially with the decorative shift in the pot). In what way does the decorative approach address initial client goals? (a reminder to review these).
ReplyDeleteAnother suggestion for the poster: Try shortening the dotted vertical line below the pot (making the pot closer to the dotted horizontal) and center the dotted vertical more. The pot should look well balanced on the vertical/horizatal, not look likes it's moving. The overall structure is very locked in to the vertical/horizontal movement that takes the viewer to the bottom.